Thursday, 23 April 2015

Boards for the crit

I need to lay out what I've done so far and then what I intend to do within the next 4 days in order to submit successfully


  • Show the 4 designs I've done
  • Show the 4 I've yet to do (the drawings) with the text for them and the poster as the style I want to do them in
  • Need to issuu all of my blog
  • Need to properly reference my essay
Hopefully this will give people an indication that yes I am behind schedule and only completed 4 designs but I have a clear plan of what it is that I need to do, just a case of doing it. Designs usually take me half a day to complete so that means it will take me 2 days to colour and complete each image. I have four left meaning that the other two can be spent tidying up my blog and essay.


First board - the question of my essay


2nd board the finished designs so far


3rd board - My 5th design and what I'll be doing


4th Board - 6th design of male nurse


5th Board



6th Board


7th Board



Final Board


I've started to issuu the blog but stil got lots to issuu on it!
All images scannned in ready to colour
Session finishes at 2:30 today giving me a good 4 hours to get some colouring done


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  • Really clear communication with your drawings
  • Strong linework
  • The aesthetic matches the direction of your idea
  • Some strong messages coming through in the drawings
  • You've researched well into your subject and chose some strong eras to compare
  • Links well to essay question
  • You've clearly put a lot of work into this. Some of the text works really well
  • Clearly done a lot of research into topic, links really well to the essay
  • I think it would be good to see you expand type more but thats just me being picky
  • If you want more focus on the imagery, maybe reduce the size/weight of the text? 
  • Use your own handwriting to add personal effects

Meccano

I asked my peers what should I do about the fact that I have two fisher price posters, and they suggested using another toy brand such as Meccano. When I looked at Meccano this seemed a genius idea because it is mechanical toys and engineering for boys. I could use that logo on the poster of the girl digging. 



Logo I made :

Logo on the image




Final ideas

1st Design - Completed

This was mocking how toy stores brand and manufacturers are creating and advertising toys that are gender biased therefore subconsciously moulding young children into these categories. 
I wanted to use old fashioned font and clothing to highlight how these attitudes of sexism are old fashioned but still occurring today (hence the modern toy). 


2nd Design - Completed

I think the little boy on this piece still looks really modern alongside the toy he is playing with but the colours I used and the font highlight an earlier era yet again so I quite like that mix. 




3rd Design - Just needs tidying up 

My idea was to take the victory posters and show a woman at work instead of dominant males. It's the idea that that is the real victory.

I started off with this design and I initially was just going to colour the female and leave the rest as line work but I began to just add darker shades of the background colour and eventually came up with a nice mix. I used a Photoshop font initially but then after showing my peers they recommended searching a font website for vintage fonts. I searched for 1940s fonts and came to a site where there were more fitting styles. I really liked one so I downloaded it but could not open it in Photoshop. I had to just print screen it and layer it on but the quality is not very good, I need to look into this further.








Almost done just needs a little bit of tidying up. I've seen others in my class replicating these kind of styles and it is something I have never explored before but I am really enjoying. Definitely something I will consider more in the future because it gives the work more clarity, especially the font.



4th design - Completed





I came across various 'My Home' posters and magazine covers when researching into 1940s housewives; all of women looking proud and posing against their furniture. I'd like to show a stay at home dad, tied to the sink with the same title. These women look really house proud and are so exaggerated. I will use the original posters as my influence for colour palette. For the text I will just use something off Photoshop for this one because they have a lot of calligraphic styles. It will be interesting to see how my illustrative style works alongside these images as they won't be as life-like.


Final design 

I am not sure whether my illustrative style works with this piece but I enjoyed creating it. I think it is quite a humorous contrast and something you definitely would not expect to see on the front cover of a magazine or a poster, even today. One day hopefully that will change. 


5th idea

These posters really made me laugh, 'She may look clean' but she is riddled with all sorts of diseases, warning men to keep away from women incase they infect them. I'd like to show a charming, handsome man with the same slogan to warn away women. Diseases can be spread by both genders not just by women. It is an equal choice; yet women are being made out to be the 'good time girls' luring in men, as if they are dangerous and men have no other choice but to be victimised. 












6th idea

'They depend on you' already gives woman a sense of strength as a professional role of nurse in the war, but we don't see many imagery of male nurses at that time. Certainly not on posters or campaigns so I would like to explore this and switch the gender roles once again. The females in the image are always looking extra beautiful and happy despite a pressurised job so will be interesting to see a male looking just as corny!





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7th idea

I like how the food adverts were linked with the war back then, like you had to be a big tough guy just to eat some nestle. It seems that all adverts were aimed towards the war. All adverts were also gender specific. When has food ever been for a certain gender other than Yorkies? I'd like to turn the man into a woman of war, a really young woman, I wonder if it would have had the same impact back then? If the woman is really young, almost a child, it mocks how nestle uses their food with violent connotations.












8th idea

My 8th idea is to use a woman in the army as the ' Your Country needs you' posters to persuade women to get involved rather than males. Or even to persuade men to still get involved, but would they if the message came from a woman? Follow me! Is a command, follow me, do as I do.. 




A possible 'back up' idea

If one of my other ideas is not working or I find time to explore this one I like the idea of the prostitute posters where men had to say no to women incase they gave them an STD. I would like to switch this on it's head and have men lurking on the corner like the 'good time girls' were. 



I think my work has a clear sense of direction now; compared to when I first started generating my ideas with the Lad Culture sketches. I think these designs will sum up more the idea of gender roles and equality, highlighting women to be 'dominant' and males as 'passive.'
I am unsure whether they work as a series as they are all so different, but they are supposed to be mocking posters of the 1940s onwards to highlight an old fashioned attitude that is still relevant today. This links nicely to my essay because I feel that modern culture is going back over in a sense; welcoming a gap once again in gender. 

Meccano - re-edited fisher price piece




















Syphillis poster development

I used this image of a 1940s man to inform my colour palette









I attempted to replicate the 'he may look clean - but' type as a diagonal across the page but it just did not match well with my style of illustration

Final image






Nurse development











I decided this font was not working so I used the original font.

Something wasn't quite working with this, I had to refer back to the original to see what I was missing. I added another mutiply layer of colour.





It still looked too slick, and the original was really grainy. I looked into some brushes and found one that I multiplied over in a grey. This worked really well and I am so pleased
I may try it out with all of them to see if they make them look more old




Nestle development





Influenced by the end image of this sequence as reference


Final design





Tuesday, 17 February 2015

More ideas - a new lass culture and gender neutral toys

I considered showing a new 'Lass' culture, mocking modern lad cultures, by showing different stereotypes of women such as pin up models, androgynous dress and 'butch' looking women. I thought of an idea where I could portray powerful women through history and have the slogan 'Lass' next to them; to make them seem more like role models of todays modern culture.








After a tutorial with Eleanor we decided that the best idea to go with would be gender neutral toys as this would be an image that would get across a message without having to add any text to it. Showing genders playing with toys that are stereotypical to the opposite.






































More contextual references


I think this is pretty similar to my approach to working digitally and the kind of text style I have started to form


Typography

This is a lovely composition and I like the typography used also

I like the thought of adding really hand written text


Poster for equality, I like the idea of layering the genders

Character design

Simplistic poster for equality. Red is seen as an equal colour here


Poster design - limited colour palette

Feminist colouring book

Posters for toys










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After a tutorial with Eleanor she felt that the images would work alone without text, and that I should consider the facial expresions of the charcters more to look more happy about the situations. She said that I should also consider my colour pallette more. I told her that I was becoming interested in old fashioned toy posters, 1940s-1960s childrens posters. I like the style of these; I don't wish to replicate them but I think certainly taking influence from the colour scheme will help my work. I think that this will also reflect my concept that I feel these sexist remarks and this whole opinion of gender in todays modern culture is old fashioned and we are going back on ourselves. I think showing these modern situations in quite an old fashioned manner could prove interesting.

I went back into some of my drawings and changed them to be more old-fashioned. I used reference imagery from the 1960's to get an idea of clothing, hairstyle and colour.




1st Design






I then came across this fisher price poster which I liked and decided to use that old fashioned font and add a hint of sexism to it










































Two that I am happy with
 1st Design


2nd Design


One that went wrong

It's hard to draw children smiling without looking really creepy. I battled with this one all day but I am just not happy with it so won't be using it











I have enjoyed sourcing my colour pallette from 1960's imagery of toddlers and posters because I feel this gives my work more context than how I usually colour realistically true to life. This will be something I consider more in the future.

After a quick tutorial with Eleanor she felt that the two posters worked in saying what I need to say about gender neutral toys and added that I may now wish to move onto adults in the workplace and at home in the different gender roles. I really liked this idea because it allows me to explore more of my essay points.


I am still researching into feminism as I am finalising my designs to stay passionate about the subject.
This was an interesting video I found about whether the word feminism is a negative connotation compared to equality.

http://thelibertarianrepublic.com/girl-explains-why-shes-not-a-feminist-guess-why/
http://thelibertarianrepublic.com/girl-explains-why-shes-not-a-feminist-guess-why/

A couple more designs I could use if they were edited